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Copyright investigations (manual article tagging)
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OK, I'll fix it. Rms125a@hotmail.com (talk) 19:33, 17 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Article cleaned by investigator or others. No remaining infringement. I think from the talk page that it is a single sentence in dispute. I've rewritten it just to be on the safe side, though it certainly would have been de minimis. Nevertheless, it was part of expanding the lede so a net positive. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 13:54, 21 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • This one needs some close review. Cf. [1], p. 3: "A Converged Infrastructure orchestrates the business request with the applications, data, and infrastructure. It defines the policies and service levels through automated workflows, provisioning, and change management design by IT and the business. Orchestration provides an application-aligned infrastructure that can be scaled up or down based on the needs of each application. Orchestration also provides centralized management of the resource pool, including billing, metering, and chargeback for consumption." This is duplicated in the article except for a few words eliminated from the send of the second sentence. I do not yet know if there is copyvio in the rest, but this is blatant. I've got to run out for a bit but am noting this here either for future me or for somebody else. :) --Moonriddengirl (talk) 14:07, 21 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]